Well it is better than the original, seven and a half minute, version (see here), which didn't even mention Jesus and did not go down too well with several church bloggers. See here, and here for example.
IMO, it is still about 60 - 90 seconds too long. I didn't make it past 2:15 for this or the original. What is its target audience?
I think this version is quite useful at a number of levels and would make a great rolling presentation at some of the events I go to.
Not sure what target audience was or who it is meant to be aimed at and so have left message with the people who commissioned it - will return with their thinking!
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Well it is better than the original, seven and a half minute, version (see here), which didn't even mention Jesus and did not go down too well with several church bloggers. See here, and here for example.
IMO, it is still about 60 - 90 seconds too long. I didn't make it past 2:15 for this or the original. What is its target audience?
I think this version is quite useful at a number of levels and would make a great rolling presentation at some of the events I go to.
Not sure what target audience was or who it is meant to be aimed at and so have left message with the people who commissioned it - will return with their thinking!
Pax
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